Sunday, March 20, 2016

Topic sentence paragraphs


  • Time ago, religión and faith were topics very hidebound, if somebody believed something different that what was accepted at that time, he or she could be punished by law. In the primitive society, every act was measured by the religion approach someone had. But now, in the modern society, in our performance as a person never mind what our believes are, but what we have, our belongings. Religion in modern society is more flexible that 200 years ago. Most people is free to believe in what they want.

  • As a result of the huge globalization and development of technology, most children and teenagers spend their time on videogames, social networks, smartphones, etc. And it makes no odds if they are in classes, with the family or even at the church. In fact, it is a trouble that annoys the older generation, because they grew up on a time when handwritten letters meant something and texting was a foreign word. Formely, Children play "la lleva, el escondido, la gallina ciega, etc" but, nowadays the kids play "Call of duty, Angry birds, PES, Mortal Combat X, etc." Noticeably, time has changed, and that is what dissapoint the most the older generation. In brief, problems between generations have increased due to the influence of technology.




1 comment:

  1. Good topic sentences and well developed paragraphs. You need to improve at the sentence level ( tenses, collocations, word order).

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